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济南朗阁:GRE考试作文解析
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新gre作文写作成绩考生完成问题过程中是否能够融合考生自己的思维和剖析写作能力,以下是gre考试写作部门issue的优异写作实例,经由过程这些优异范文或是习作,考生可以借鉴浪漫的短语、句子或思绪,给自己的写作找一些思绪和灵感

  新gre作文写作成绩考生完成问题过程中是否能够融合考生自己的思维和剖析写作能力,以下是gre考试写作部门issue的优异写作实例,经由过程这些优异范文或是习作,考生可以借鉴浪漫的短语、句子或思绪,给自己的写作找一些思绪和灵感。
  "Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, they in fact, prevent people from developingsintostruly strong and independent individuals."
  Do modern luxuries serve to undermine our true strength and independence as individuals? The speaker believes so, and I tend to agree. Consider the automobile, for example. Most people consider the automobile a necessity rather than a luxury; yet it is for this very reason that the automobile so aptly supports the speaker’s point. To the extent that we depend on cars as crutches, they prevent us from becoming truly independent and strong in character as individuals.
  可借鉴之处:开首启用了一个很是精明的问句,这是最能吸引批卷者视线也是高分作文的默示!
  Consider first the effect of the automobile on our independence as individuals. In some respects the automobile serves to enhance such independence. For example, cars make it possible for people in isolated and depressed areas without public transportation to become more independent by pursuing gainful employment outside their communities. And teenagers discover that owning a car, or even borrowing one on occasion, affords them a needed sense of independence from their parents.
  此段主若是为下一段的驳论作铺垫。
  精髓:Consider first…
  in some respects…=in some cases, to some extent
  注重afford的用法
  However, cars have diminished our independence in a number of more significant respects.
  We’ve grown dependent on our cars for commuting to work. We rely on them like crutches for short trips to the corner store, and for carting our children to and from school. Moreover, the car has become a means not only to our assorted physical destinations but also to the attainment of our socioeconomic goals, insofar as the automobile has become a symbol of status. In fact, in my observation many, if not most, working professionals willingly undermine their financial security for the sake of being seen driving this year’s new SUV or luxury sedan. In short, we’ve become slaves to the automobile.
  精髓:diminish our independence in a number of more significant respects
  注重not only…but also的用法
  没有什么惊六合泣鬼神的事例,但却能用泛泛糊口中的点滴起到说理的浸染,此法值获救鉴。
  Consider next the overall impact of the automobile on our strength as individuals, by which I mean strength of character, or mettle. I would be hard-pressed to list one way in which the automobile enhances one’s strength of character. Driving a powerful SUV might afford a person a feeling and appearance of strength, or machismo(汉子气派). But this feeling has nothing to do with a person’s true character. In contrast, there is a certain strength of character that comes with eschewing modern conveniences such as cars, and with the knowledge that one is contributing to a cleaner and quieter environment, a safer neighborhood, and arguably a more genteel society. Also, alternative modes of transportation such as bicycling and walking are forms of exercise which require and promote the virtue of self-discipline. Finally, in my observation people who have forsaken the automobile spend more time at home,swheresthey are more inclined to prepare and even grow their own food, and to spend more time with their families. The former enhances one’s independence; the latter enhances the integrity of one’s values and the strength of one’s family.精髓:contribute to Consider next…Also,…Finally,…in my observation…

  以上就是朗阁外语培训学校关于gre高分作文解析,雅思考生们在备考新gre作文时可以彼此借鉴,切忌生搬硬套,朗阁希望考生们可以根据以上高分作文找一下写作灵感和思绪,朗阁一切只为最高分。

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